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Loss of Reason by ~ThePalePoetess17:iconThePalePoetess17:



Loss of Reason (3/22/08)

I have lost my passion
For the words of rhyme
They used to come out easily
Draping like a vine

But my words have no more flow
I just can’t get it right
I sit up all day thinking
Straight into the night

No emotional drive
And no time to feel
My body keeps on going
In a circle like a reel

What am I going to do?
This talent is my soul
It helps me keep on going
It fills my inner hole

I’m reduced to ridicule
The art of misunderstanding
And where I’m going- who could say
It’s a long road where I’m standing
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Submitted: March 22
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Help!!!!!!!!!! Writer's Block imposition!!!!!!!!!!

<3 Manda

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~VaanSjokolade:iconVaanSjokolade: Mar 22, 2008, 8:50:35 PM
hmm... i see now.

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~ThePalePoetess17:iconThePalePoetess17: Mar 23, 2008, 4:52:50 AM
well what do you see- i need help? yea that was long ago astablished.

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~VaanSjokolade:iconVaanSjokolade: Mar 23, 2008, 12:15:48 PM
um no...that's actually not what i saw.

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This is the dark bunny. Copy him into your signature to help him achieve total domination.

"I like pigs. Dogs look up to us. Cats look down at us. Pigs treat us as equals."
-Sir Winston Churchil
~ThePalePoetess17:iconThePalePoetess17: Mar 23, 2008, 1:48:27 PM
then note me and tell me.

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Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet.
George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?
~VaanSjokolade:iconVaanSjokolade: Mar 23, 2008, 4:11:54 PM
aha!

*as cryptically/mysteriously as possible*

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(='.'=)
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This is the dark bunny. Copy him into your signature to help him achieve total domination.

"I like pigs. Dogs look up to us. Cats look down at us. Pigs treat us as equals."
-Sir Winston Churchil
~ThePalePoetess17:iconThePalePoetess17: Mar 23, 2008, 5:27:01 PM
fine, whatever.

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Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet.
George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?
~VaanSjokolade:iconVaanSjokolade: Mar 23, 2008, 5:40:17 PM
heehee.

Fine, I guess I'll stop being so cryptic.

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"A subject for a great poet would be God's boredom after the seventh day of creation"
-Friedrich Nietzsche
~ThePalePoetess17:iconThePalePoetess17: Mar 23, 2008, 6:07:33 PM
thank you.

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Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet.
George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?