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Perfection by ~ThePalePoetess17:iconThePalePoetess17:



Perfection (as close as I can get) (3/23/08)

It’s a funny sort of feeling
When I see him stare
The butterflies just flutter
And then I wonder where . . .

I lose my train of thought
And sometimes I just can’t speak
He makes me incoherent
And he thinks it’s sweet

His words melt me to nothing
I can’t help but just adore
This new found wonder of my world
Is what I’ve waited for

I feel like I may burst
From plain feeling alone
I find I always falter
When he uses that tone

And this wouldn’t be enough
But for this simple truth
The same is right for him
His face tells every truth
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umm do i really need to say- i had the BEST day . . . .

-Vlad

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~VaanSjokolade:iconVaanSjokolade: Mar 23, 2008, 6:25:51 PM
hehe....NICE

*flashes thumbs-up*

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"A subject for a great poet would be God's boredom after the seventh day of creation"
-Friedrich Nietzsche
~ThePalePoetess17:iconThePalePoetess17: Mar 23, 2008, 6:26:52 PM
it was a wonderful day.

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Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet.
George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?
~whispered-cares:iconwhispered-cares: Mar 24, 2008, 8:53:51 AM
lol
I'm glad you cheerful<3

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"Word to the wise, don’t follow in my footsteps. I run into walls" - Love & Broomsticks, harrypotterfanfiction.com
*CherishedMemories:iconCherishedMemories: May 27, 2008, 2:50:29 AM
I remember times I felt like that when I was younger. Wonderful feelings of attraction.
~ThePalePoetess17:iconThePalePoetess17: 4 days 14 hours ago
oh, very wonderful.

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Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet.
George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?